【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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0 J, j+ j& \; W' J我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( O2 f- c2 y2 t9 oThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; {: C; ~+ r+ V7 T' t3 nFrom the first moment we met,
+ L% i3 n5 E. g$ O8 gI already loved you with all my heart
( ?' q2 S  [# c2 O5 _. AWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
- Q' d- I9 T2 r& v" N5 q9 `I would probably know how you feel
& q+ u3 v5 E; O& y- mLove… just the word love
8 e# |. R( f4 `. [) lWhy is it so difficult to express?
1 p( J+ R  q9 @, \$ DI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
- D7 _. C6 r) C7 pOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, |/ g2 J+ T$ I* n' y' |  WIf today isn’t too late,
2 T+ @6 [: h6 wI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
7 ]& q, y1 `0 K' C' b$ yEntrust my love within your heart
" E  Y$ ~/ O% s1 W# ILove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
, _/ O3 t& T. J$ u' kBut I never did
* x" W7 z, R- S& S( b# K2 P1 yOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
& n8 U* w3 R5 q0 [( n( b. j, _9 oI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- [* r5 [4 b9 S! y* W6 UI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ X: L7 W, `' C# ]" [& I" O* }Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( h- J  x8 o$ s# eCan I entrust it to you?
. ]* K. ?3 `& {% v# y% ]  P' JEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  _7 w  g; ^# z! V<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% i. t+ o$ `( I1 H% J<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
- ?) E& [0 a. b: t1 {<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
+ \: j7 b) ]1 \( c0 H  ~+ L<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
* g0 k3 W% D! z' G4 \<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
& j3 u) Q3 p/ L' O* B+ U<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
3 e6 Y) \" B$ d% V8 q<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ u) [- j) ^4 y3 q<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ c: Z* q: ]* U' P! Z<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 h7 j1 U) W9 D$ d& F+ V9 _<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# G7 r3 [2 y  U<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
: |9 U( z  \* m9 @, Z<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 B. f/ l2 a$ N+ A2 v<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* D( Q/ _; @3 P! Q/ y: |<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ O- I, Q  T, I0 }1 N0 d5 X<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# C0 x+ w1 G  p2 e# K# H<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 C+ T( n7 w9 A& K6 Z" |<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# D+ W6 p! v6 N! ~2 D<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
$ l( O* \" s4 d! h# Y<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
" ]# z) [+ N& c3 j1 |4 ?<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" y' G# e- N& k% Z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' i) L' e& s* P$ D7 Y2 F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% r- Z, J0 L, U$ a1 ^2 I<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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5 ]0 e9 _2 ]" f' x7 W- O这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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  O8 U# C/ W7 n) Y' M<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>