【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
* R& P3 S1 E! O2 \5 kThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 a" h6 G3 x* Y' M$ E# K/ eFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
# C2 o, C) W- H, o- d: rWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
! u# H5 A& K& _- N6 _7 \/ }8 `If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
# d- m  F4 C- V) f1 h9 s% ]I would probably know how you feel
1 E- ~3 u6 _6 c! f" v# i. m( n1 a) BLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
& w$ D5 H2 I% v8 F* X& X1 N, ]But I never did
" z) ?$ x: M$ Y1 }( ROne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 \  |: I& i6 U2 s7 t% UCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
% V) B4 @8 B& Y% T  ?Love… just the word love
: u+ w2 ~7 F/ ?$ S$ |Why is it so difficult to express?
6 J$ V8 s* f2 ^& E! LI want to confess that I love you,
4 O* v  m5 j. KBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  z2 @- t- z  T& Y- i0 kIf today isn’t too late,
- Z6 N- f3 T6 f4 z/ o3 z$ R5 rI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% \  }8 m; o9 h2 E6 W5 C" NCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
5 L( F6 K" p+ N6 J5 b! T2 I. pEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
' k+ x9 O+ `( S$ B0 |4 @2 P, Z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% v7 h* S' n. f3 ^<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
9 C9 _7 v, i7 m; _1 y- c8 |  Y5 q<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! s5 s8 Z# ]& |) f" i% ~<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
( y3 h& f/ b( O: ]<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
! g1 r, ^# N, M) ]0 _5 M2 N% J<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
* |* S, j- ~" j7 G" p) }<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' A8 g+ e7 i  M3 O' l6 ]! U! G8 D<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) _' [& Z1 P$ G2 h" i<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# f* s4 x- T' y: l+ q1 ]. u<P>我想说我爱你</P>
( F8 J9 ]3 N$ h- r- A+ W; ]7 ~<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
! h3 _0 S3 M2 G- u/ O<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 j9 H' ~4 ^4 S' P, S7 e/ L" R: S<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
, {  [; a! m* j$ X  ?  N+ Z5 U+ `" b<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; n3 f' `5 @. w<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 |' o# ]! `; Z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ H+ p# J7 C- a2 W* M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( W+ _& [5 O( Z5 U' f/ ]1 K<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 X# D2 N  _9 R4 G) E4 l7 W: _  t0 P<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# E% }$ A" G% _3 E7 Y3 _<P>Love… just the word love </P>
+ q9 \4 [; _0 N& `+ z& G: `<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
, C5 V/ l3 e) B+ d! M# |<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ s1 {2 f+ D0 U6 v<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 i- j) h; W' n' F6 o1 `6 G% e<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
9 ?2 G, p% u3 n% {0 P" x<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
5 L# h: b! Y* C" S0 e! Z! W<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ Y+ p# G1 p1 }5 d: [<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
  G/ o: @2 z4 j: v/ b<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 Z7 S" b  U% X' p& b<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 h% M6 c# A; h( j  y* e  b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 u9 i# g; D2 u0 ~2 c8 d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
- e+ E3 a3 _! [/ t" s<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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  R# u' i7 M. b' _% p这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ E6 p7 n, W1 M9 B/ d  Z9 F<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>