【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ M6 ?2 [- y$ y! FThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
7 g+ X; i9 d! D8 r- RFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
0 D- C0 [4 ^/ i( g' h; ZWe meet and talk everyday,
  \) `& T  a& ~. ?$ mBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
. E2 m! ?) k# ?% ]Love… just the word love
2 \. |; S: ]% E) V/ ]# R$ P& ^* QWhy is it so difficult to express?
- F- T8 A, T: t  {I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
9 t# L) m3 F6 A1 W% QOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
$ x1 \, G4 F. n& r& q$ i3 k$ MI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 f* Q8 Y0 M9 m0 O* N! z. u. v3 r  @I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 Y2 Q' O+ D6 M# ^7 A5 f. MCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
5 g+ U/ g8 n2 M: fLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
) |% b2 [  \' l9 O" R' A1 l! |7 iI want to confess that I love you,
, m2 c1 y; C% k7 m. RBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 B% A4 g" r% Q2 CIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" p1 g# a+ |" y) [6 G: FI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
! b8 d7 E9 B/ J! EEntrust my love within your heart
# Y: E* |& w  N% l8 C( n: y0 `+ G+ {Can I entrust it to you?
1 L6 R7 Y# l8 y% pEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
6 s7 X, Q- b2 B' O5 e<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" F1 P: G; K$ }$ U1 n  e0 \<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
) Q9 i3 h4 g& A" T+ d<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
0 Z8 G/ ~9 j6 {* k+ R<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
0 w2 v- ~" \6 y0 ]! C; c' J<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
; m( C/ r4 ~- [" Z4 y2 L<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
. u$ Y4 r$ W8 @2 p; p<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
& x3 r8 V- z! l4 Y- |2 c: f<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
6 N0 C$ m; p) Q& v, l<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" r' f- C5 v) g; t, x3 J( a3 Z' p  Q<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
$ X* U( r' P/ R. F2 @; S. T  t( A<P>但我不会</P>
/ e: Q! p) x8 ^% W% S" N% a1 F<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 R& Y: `. N( ?5 r<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ x# _8 d# c% m- I4 B1 Z7 Z3 A+ \<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  n1 f; d3 V; }) w; S9 [<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 z( f; r& M! s" x- r$ J7 [<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
9 r# m" c; g5 x2 O! B, s<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
; x* A: Z# M! S& Y1 I<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* f) m+ i3 ?3 w& Q0 h1 N% B# K" x. p<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' m# G& J& q* c' ?  i; m<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% K  o) ]2 n, ]& l<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: U3 q+ Y% w0 `9 B) O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- D; I) Q7 v1 z5 X. x$ x5 z+ P# l0 @8 h<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: q) \8 Q# j. Q* }  R8 C% f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 _& B! J$ Z0 w% D4 M" e% ?2 @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
5 I9 P+ p; M! l8 h& C<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

( K6 t3 I3 a( O# Q+ `这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 v1 s3 H6 [1 N+ M<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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! h7 I, @& `2 u9 [: _6 a<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>