【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
3 X+ r; D' F' x& QThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- d" v, m9 g: q/ I5 ?& O1 _That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 ]1 g* R* w& qFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
" a" p/ z" V2 \But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
; Q3 t% K' R  h# C5 uWhy is it so difficult to express?
" D( C  a- j! c. s7 n9 v6 N8 AI want to confess that I love you,
9 y  N& S3 S% x8 fBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 G  ^- o% P2 v5 `If today isn’t too late,
7 W- i9 V- `$ |0 F* |: p6 ZI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: _' M! c  g/ t; Q1 Y# CI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ v$ m% [2 ?/ R, J+ K$ H9 W3 xCan I entrust it to you?
% w" h1 M9 [+ iEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
5 Z5 A' D$ q' k2 @! m$ C/ MBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
* a- v6 o9 B; VI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 L/ ^1 l- n; ~/ DI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 m  V( ~- z3 w9 R0 k; v+ JCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

: r' @) J9 a  Q<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 ~; M0 j0 L! ~& K2 J5 e<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( |3 y! ~( V& _# Z# O* O<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
* o* r2 j# w% J6 [6 T# i. z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
- ?: t7 j/ O. s! D% E" Z5 R* r<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
5 v+ s3 L) V, `: b7 J" T<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
) o( P; o3 w+ g6 i- Z<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
: k+ Q& Y& }1 t% q9 d1 L7 \<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
; c5 ^" K% y& @4 {' t5 P' N<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
7 @+ h: f0 f, Q. M: y5 G6 Y2 n<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 o! a- G* N' a0 x5 X' r. s<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
" Z* K! \$ O+ m<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
; N# @, G% Y# U! W<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 t# V3 ^6 c9 l8 m5 L<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) h: T+ _. c- a1 V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* B3 V3 @7 J/ \1 [5 A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) h/ k" g9 L# s+ f<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
9 c1 F6 P0 @& o<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
! G7 y( I) q9 K$ Q1 g<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
5 P/ z" G! h' J5 R1 u) Q<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
# F! B( A( c! ~! h; p<P>但我不会 </P>
- D+ z# ~4 O' d4 r<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 M3 X& D& a) a$ w" m<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 C3 |% t& r$ ^6 P$ X2 s<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
% l4 ~7 p  I1 T0 q1 }. M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" ~6 h6 M5 {. `& K<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; A+ p- R5 L1 H<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" ]3 Q* o; G9 `: E5 C. D5 y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

  ~6 e' @' ~  O( m/ X8 S; [' [ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

8 N) W; R  Z( j3 C: U6 U这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 i! z0 X8 `- ~2 i& w6 s
# \( n' x' q8 b' o2 ?  r这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- J7 Z& w5 [6 X) P4 l2 z0 b% n<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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5 i$ A0 k. S* Y+ J* K<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>