【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
" |/ x, K2 K. m2 ~9 M0 v' p0 r  cThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
; b# L  O/ m% i$ O% E$ G( p; {We meet and talk everyday,
2 t; B3 M" {% \) l9 O1 L, oBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
& f; y) |5 }& |9 eIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
8 s, D- D/ C: h  p0 p1 cLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
+ l, `8 X( a' c# Y: pOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- K& J! r$ X. n4 `. H/ U% a$ iIf today isn’t too late,
$ c4 C$ J: j" B2 iI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 G% n; t  J! v  X9 ?I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. D" W* U+ K  z* ^" l3 e" t  ZCan I entrust it to you?
2 w0 T& o( v0 H/ I! S, oEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
: _7 N, a7 u- U  s# i4 i/ \6 xBut I never did
2 f9 C' V8 }0 GOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 x0 C9 r$ R0 VIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 s/ ]' S  O* u7 j& WI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
7 r( Z: b( B' Q3 @, ^, v8 ~9 IEntrust my love within your heart

% G6 l' f( Y5 h) s. n8 U) N- U[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 I& e9 b# i" ]0 o  d<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
, c# B1 Q4 C; T* Y/ W- e<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
! m3 \/ g4 I  B6 q<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
: b+ v. K4 ^: d" T<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
' k7 d8 ]- y* }# d3 f1 @<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
. {; Y. [) K. c" g0 D8 B/ C<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
' {$ P  r( ~; }- B: P<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
* j" @% w3 ?  L$ i4 e/ i* d0 U<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
9 i0 t- B8 Z4 M9 [4 Q6 l<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
8 g$ ?- P- J+ z* V/ x<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 Q  h2 G2 w) }2 k0 I/ f2 I<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
6 ~2 S2 H/ \2 z<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
. q+ O8 M+ \6 S<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
' C, o+ B6 j6 ^0 O6 O3 V9 Q/ b<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
9 P) _9 z! M$ p+ g<P>但我不会</P>
- h; G( {2 G' F3 }: L$ x7 D<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
: M7 r$ C& Q4 s# O8 }; l8 H6 R<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ {9 x1 R, N- W6 T3 O- n<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* Z. _% w; I" ^7 a- b# \; `<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* m8 |. m! l" K! E<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  K; ]/ k) b* E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 t1 d! l. R  v  W! j/ h+ v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, [! I9 P5 O1 h' N: A7 Y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 [: k' l" ^7 ^) L8 F+ B7 W6 _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 o, @6 o, F8 y) {<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
  S& i- B2 P& x3 ?  n, G, `( C<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* ]4 I; q- u+ O; ]. m<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
" P9 o5 h% b! G$ I<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 M$ M5 }0 ?! ~5 F# y$ I<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
: Z& q2 v: Z7 w6 C, R& M<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
' ?/ j* A2 a4 X) l9 L5 `% v6 t<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& D4 [+ q& }  x- @+ Y6 H<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ @! N) j, s) W& A- S  `% V7 v<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 q: e* U% B8 `( U  I<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 Y. v8 {3 L+ N0 `3 C<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  j3 B; |. H. i) r' H# u<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" y2 j% k0 m; D; D2 `4 N2 w+ Z9 C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! e% A4 V" y% e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 j. D/ T& }9 z! m<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
$ {% K, A3 O9 ^8 X9 r; P<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

5 T5 Q# u3 M: g  G) q+ @" a' M这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

! r* f; {) L3 W+ k% Y* Y. V; A& g2 [这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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  r# ^& R# \% }& G6 M<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>