【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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) |3 H& d/ F. i% X我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ Z' M& V! }/ Y8 {  f2 C( mThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 w+ I, O( O4 x7 @From the first moment we met,
! k" e! W8 f2 b6 m( c9 e3 kI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
3 u' i: m5 x9 h% N# u5 Y, YIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
* \/ ?9 w$ }) q  A+ zLove… just the word love
5 l9 \  q7 c- q3 H, O* E; i& L7 qWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 x0 O- J( W$ eOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ T! y  s) i; s2 B1 W5 Z* ]* X! vIf today isn’t too late,
  L5 w% X' t5 E" [2 xI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 o! E' ]1 L; u! M  A' z  FI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
5 O, z' w$ V7 j: kEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
  v1 y$ o$ K! Y" VBut I never did
) p6 y0 B  f/ P% r/ O# T" _One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 g, }. U6 i0 s: H2 T3 a7 pI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
2 L: a, y& Z$ jEntrust my love within your heart
7 x1 i8 K6 e8 j8 U; vCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 W) c! o7 {5 D- a: ]<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
5 i4 r% W  A& i& N% l0 y1 X<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: a% p  I$ S( |; k<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
* Z$ Y3 o% p' c1 ^<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
2 X1 }2 d, x( u* ?  ]! U7 Q5 m<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 i+ e  w9 ?, `; R<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
' X. x; T4 L% `<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
! l1 X- M! k4 }! O: U. ~<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
6 v$ [. h5 {3 c0 ^- D<P>但我不会</P>
( N8 M+ X+ I3 H& ~4 ~: q<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 m& b: u! g  |1 P, X<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! D% @8 Y3 R. d: i, J  p( f<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' n) s2 W; D- D; f4 P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! x1 ?- N' b  _, I<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% A7 E/ C9 I2 ^( h( T<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
% V! n. P, Z$ e# k8 L- ?<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
6 g1 J) G# A) L( _<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 y2 r3 j3 I8 ?* V<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
; G5 s0 \) _4 A& G8 V& m" @) K" Q<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 t# x8 P) s, \# y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! ^: x% K; v; c8 J$ i9 C$ q9 M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. a( f- t' D- z, ]" i# m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" K+ b7 u8 O' t# i* Q: |<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* H( _* c/ \! n+ o; p3 g& s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 \9 E  X7 R1 l) s$ |: E" X3 z<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
4 K; p  u, |! o<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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# ], @- U. G& j8 A8 j<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>