【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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, L  t. }% y7 |5 `5 k, g- PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( P! M& H8 W* ^* ^% t2 o7 HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ j1 Q2 s1 d( O3 T  {% \The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% O! u5 A' ]+ [* t- gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, ^0 c* {4 v! U  u% {0 s: WYou needn’t fear anything
) B, {1 X5 X% G) @( IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* T5 j7 S( H/ S  Q9 @& E% bI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 x4 Z6 d3 f) {# WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ c4 Z$ f/ x, [9 I) m0 q; OI want so much to see inside your heart
- y7 i, h9 H1 L8 M  HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( T4 Z3 f) c! s- c1 mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  V3 R" k6 s; Q) |4 bI regret not dying
% k! [7 b: Z4 `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 ~! d2 }" X# Z0 wWith such a tongue as yours,
+ ]3 u" p( Q% GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ i; Q7 e1 x+ g2 B5 Y7 aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 E; ]! P  q, s! F7 VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 {, m" h" C7 J! t0 O' u+ m<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! e2 P9 l- k2 B- m<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' U9 W& F- g: V; D0 E! n<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 x5 v0 H2 m* `* R: n, X: H) ]$ S<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; V2 o3 @5 |" j" c1 B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! d, ]2 l4 d: `0 C8 \  ~2 b- W<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 t6 Z/ ~1 E3 E- p8 S1 {' k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 v: n" @6 T5 A' \<P>你无需担心</P>
8 {, Y  y: S$ I# d) A* S# v<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& W8 m) q# `! B9 _8 P1 w0 |7 H2 }8 k  G<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 A+ _5 `$ A9 |7 U; d* A<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- [! l4 y% @4 K. a, j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ w) M" r, H& R1 a$ [, `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 _3 L3 k4 p' r<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; d; v$ z; ^# J; L: }5 C/ a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 _0 k: f( f/ i! C/ `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 r  g) D( T  ?<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ D* [  \( b2 \8 _  K2 ]<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% E4 G; N# D- u$ W4 |% A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 K6 k1 ?8 P: U4 E<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ N+ x# U  A5 M/ R: {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" ^) J9 A; c  W) m4 o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- S/ [. f* Z1 E/ x: u& C% u- E, p<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 M2 h0 C0 w+ `! m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) e$ x( H+ I! f7 ?, C3 B' p1 S4 y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) q9 W1 w$ ~# ^* y7 Q1 d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 _! D' T! S- c* b; {# }<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 U( C4 ~" b# h/ ]3 v# U我请你剖开它

: ]& f4 ^* p5 c3 \/ M$ V) P 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# R' d- A# |! u$ @- z8 `; D<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>