【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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$ m8 f* e3 s+ X$ }" n# q7 E歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ v6 q% Y) ?- o- EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 u" r- Q! U% S# m/ z2 J9 mThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' O4 F( R# Z" m5 |: P! d* F9 PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) |- ~$ i9 P& W. BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ }" i1 Q, A9 `! l% t. H1 uEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 X: K( x% Y& r- ~I love you I love you with all my heart
: Z$ t% w2 B; c& U3 lNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ \. G1 k, R( ^% K) u( ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( {) ]; v; r- @6 _- M( ?% y& uI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 w  q3 m9 E: @$ t2 \, e% G! ?5 ?8 aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 j* {5 t" N0 Y$ g- K: @- W: VI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 h' B* y8 j/ M4 l6 `) e$ k+ hWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 J& f% M7 \) o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' ~' c  ^, Z% z$ o- Q" _* k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# h0 n' F% U* K$ J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. }5 K7 e  v8 p  |, J* E, D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! n2 }6 Q, O4 I2 n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: }4 U% R6 Q6 p; d2 f& T/ m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 y: {6 R0 a8 V2 t! h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. E6 _3 ?2 Y& S- ]) V<P>你无需担心</P>
2 z6 h  j" Q+ U/ T4 w+ m3 b( e<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% G- h+ j  ~3 \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 v# U0 p1 @# |) H2 U<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: G3 J7 D/ o: ?; L( B8 u# y0 [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( [/ ~' L) e) b0 q5 J# r) \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  t) d3 u2 R8 W8 Y9 ?1 u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 _" t# m% r" L, n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 k( u8 J. a5 z; d4 l4 [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* ?0 G7 [# n! }: j* D- u3 _, T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 Q" H& U% c% k" J* p3 @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 {3 T  ~& D, g7 S: v$ K<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ ], A% |! Q9 |' E! n. o% O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 w! I5 S% a2 d5 h. M+ k<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  P  _3 |) n! i# M<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 k* {; ]4 O$ u5 T# [+ u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ L; x, X7 N* `4 h$ v* u, T<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 v* Q3 Z7 k3 j2 I<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% t# Z/ z& Q; k# w9 a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 ~- X' K( K/ A" A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( Z4 l7 g/ e; }3 L& g0 A<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>