【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( M* Q* y# d# H3 Z) x5 f8 S- NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 Q1 A" s+ P" h( }3 Z* D1 PThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* e, r/ \- L5 r( g: E, d1 c* p' Q0 sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ _  x0 h+ B5 w9 ^8 s6 cI want so much to see inside your heart
5 e, Y  v& s0 `- v8 g$ W2 K2 ]I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& d. [, C; \2 g8 E0 \4 [2 g% pI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( C* |+ K8 x! H$ ZI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ c/ ~/ y7 _  K1 ]; T+ q% Y9 aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& U0 g- |8 `3 b1 s- ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" f2 e0 ~! m) N9 O# U( m* B+ c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ H* B7 M0 H# `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 K1 J; r1 {, V: O) }% C* X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, `' S" Q% g0 y9 w9 P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 D& I4 p# o; N. i9 e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% p+ w7 R9 D9 g; p9 a& Y8 L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& x" F. }5 H6 m1 ^6 j* x: A/ l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% l# |" F* o/ `<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) N% d5 y7 }3 u. L8 v<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 z; c) Q6 k4 o* k  M7 {8 Y' |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 `  C, w4 n4 s$ }<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! q" p3 p) i. H3 T* H2 l* g5 j) S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 A, N3 I0 n5 H! q6 N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' S7 g6 @; p' X0 O: s8 w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- T' K) ]+ W6 \5 I" l* E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* X' M+ b/ i7 x7 c! S# ]2 \* ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* G( g) t0 U& D& V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" d+ t6 d7 k7 i6 J2 c# ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. c' p8 J" d) |; D<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  N  a* I7 Q; j6 S! ~0 z) H% `+ I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 Y$ ^: v. e  m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! i1 B$ [3 n) H! C<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ A* l3 _  n; c. _( R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! l4 y$ W7 g9 |$ V0 O' d6 J6 S1 `' H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 l3 w# q" \. L' t9 @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, @: E5 N' X, j1 ?2 o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 R1 c$ v. {4 d2 k# {4 r我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* a/ z( D3 y, ?6 B7 o. g; X6 y3 x<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>