【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
# \  U7 G/ x7 LThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ p3 d# I, A5 [' I) R' VWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ U( [$ ^. _" d, s$ E: s9 DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 |& ?6 i/ D9 r0 h" V: T( `The sky is happy down to its soul
4 u1 R6 k3 F  oWith the moon kissing it every night
" x# S/ f9 P: P& z/ B% D2 s, ySeeing the sky content with its love
; C( K* b5 u. D$ z' j7 ~( _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ a7 R& }: n/ b: S, C$ VYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, n8 Y! T$ f8 J: l3 u. m) }& mEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% j  d2 l2 v# e9 o8 W& C( XI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; m2 f2 V9 S3 u' s& W% o* YI want so much to see inside your heart
/ N9 Q$ {; T3 u" ~% p2 s+ yI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 N  {2 Y! H" o! H& nI’m still filled with fear
& {" s1 ]( f% x8 V4 sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ p& E8 _# Y( P/ D8 lI regret not dying
( y2 B- e" p4 n: dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: Q+ A4 z1 P/ f# l0 Z( cWith such a tongue as yours,
" p  `/ {% D& @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ ~: l# H# X- m  j7 D. {5 rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 g9 X( }# Q. V! i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: o) A8 M/ O- o7 ~" g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 R) a& N" l7 F/ q$ x- q2 [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( u+ @  J  E) \, k" n+ V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" C8 o2 s! r/ o( S  j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" d1 |6 b9 j% f1 V/ u/ ^; c<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# r5 ~/ T4 W# W<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; ]- |# m6 s" r% a2 {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' [* u, s  r" z' ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 U1 X$ o  V3 q( e<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# j1 ^) j. ?/ C+ t1 ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# Z, I" N/ \2 Q4 O# C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 w6 o* |& B# p0 m; Y, @% B<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 x9 S/ R" |* M! c' U<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* I- {/ O/ ~& h& V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! _2 `. e2 k4 T" r9 H* o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ W$ K5 d  Q, _, [" A8 b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 }2 @& j% s* Y- R# W6 R+ v1 p9 C$ J<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! `+ |1 J. I- P- y, v2 h/ C5 y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, v* t# T  f. ]. U  k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' v- D" V. y2 u9 T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 G5 d4 I, S$ Z9 t  E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 r, n" I) Q( V9 F<P>I regret not dying</P>
; U" ~- l1 B7 R1 y3 c% f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# u* g* l/ t4 o& y' |* Q) S<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 b/ Q' p4 h' D/ J; B& ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 R/ X" n" z9 w: O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- }2 F+ L' m0 v. ]" L+ d9 O) u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 f! w2 G: R' @4 f4 Q; i<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( R+ I) h* c, K: N) u- z) Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ U& z% l# o: M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; M, U! m- X8 m/ ]1 f$ T  R我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, F, |) X% I7 m<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>