【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
. d) T" f8 H' b( o9 |The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 g* U. H6 ^! `4 b, A# T' O( r( CMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" I* f' _9 f( U! }The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) s& V9 H, m' p8 X0 W. c. ?, W# LThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 Z0 }8 o$ U- J6 WEvery other word you utter is love
# F5 |# n+ {8 yI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( D/ N7 E1 r0 z; _4 sI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 h& `/ ^; _, s% @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 d2 e  S8 l  {6 }% |/ `With such a tongue as yours,
( n$ i$ X) Y6 Y+ Q0 h7 |! i. m# HYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, p& c- w7 Z  G+ f: ^4 mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% d" f- v5 ^% @) [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! E1 p* N# m% o<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ k" m2 e2 ?( _; X) H: X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' w1 R1 H4 L# ?1 a6 q# Z. M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ I. k3 b. U1 \) b! i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 [2 L4 h7 j  s0 L/ T- t: r# F" e1 R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( c& |1 V( z3 O: Q# f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" t/ n' J7 b$ t0 Z3 C( M& o, s. p) T<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, T5 y& Q  ]' y9 @# U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# ]# V# v  r9 h/ B' z2 I5 F# [& d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& Y) K* j: l: T2 E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ X9 h  A7 y. ~8 L) s/ \<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' }% y3 e( \- ^  P0 {  {<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 ^1 ^- _% i% \) z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 s, @; G7 o# g! n! ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 r! B) t1 `7 x5 v  X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" C3 C! ?  U, |* S% w. u<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  g' ^5 |, ?( _3 o, b<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  W3 r5 e7 M8 ]. w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" d5 `0 J% m, H7 w% P9 D<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& j/ w/ B* u" Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( l2 B* a5 Z% K3 x! l/ b% C<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 V: u* I3 [; N  l* i. ]; @4 c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ x1 Y8 W' `9 o( ~" E/ @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 e" y+ o# ?/ M) y. ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 p" r8 |& O' R6 A9 Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 X( k' R$ E1 ]" p" z  h<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ Y, T: @1 Z5 f" Z0 G& K7 i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! J: X2 L. t8 \0 X; K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 L$ @+ A9 f: k$ |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 D9 T% S. B% n2 h- P5 v7 u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ l, j4 c: T! [4 v  C我请你剖开它
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9 q5 Z$ S% t# _ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>