【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" D) \- _0 I8 IThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. u3 g: F  }8 D7 m6 QI really want to know just how much you love me
. x" W& s7 R9 K0 P9 L/ _I love you I love you with all my heart
8 J) f% C0 b5 G" K" e+ M- sNothing can compare to my love
% _+ T% w4 g7 M# @& e7 wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ D% H5 X( F& Z- X5 F2 UI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 {6 n( L6 W/ Z  \. w) v6 ]I’m still filled with fear
6 M2 L8 H7 ?3 \6 `; |' Q. w9 EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) w  F. H$ M' N9 p" W! uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 t. S: c0 J' @5 Y! K5 d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 [" u4 ~# O# H7 d. t  n! H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: v  f2 G+ n( l( B: O# ~1 a5 e9 K/ [<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# H% q* s% r( s; O2 R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( V8 ^1 T1 C' g* e) R7 S7 y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) {2 B3 P, k4 z9 T/ j# r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 D/ E3 Z3 N+ o% ~# c( P' ~: m6 L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& X) Y  X5 t* k0 a& X, `$ Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, ?0 f/ R+ U! V9 M<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) h) H1 h9 Z& h+ s  i- \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; N# q$ t# h! Z: F$ ^% t) Y' J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 F( U. q8 l! x% Q5 T7 W+ n<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( k: v( \' B' X1 `! L: s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ v5 d. E) m- ^( F<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 Y3 R8 L2 n! j! ]7 U3 q6 H8 @% |' h<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" v2 H+ v' r# h* L9 v! W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* n* ^9 c* Y# Y" X3 y2 T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" A3 t; X7 j% t( r4 H; W3 Q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; o$ {9 H; ~0 ^3 j  |<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 M: s( v/ d/ o$ P' I) G. A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" R( [2 s1 n4 `" q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* t  F/ U2 p. Y5 W$ j<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ N9 p/ t; r7 Q) I, L<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 ]9 V4 J6 {0 W$ A/ C+ o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- |; @8 v5 O! g2 x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ w& L3 X6 f+ p3 \& B. N0 S: u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ O( f1 w. j1 c: K& [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 q0 y! r, \* i+ y( l. ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 b' P6 ?7 f9 u; t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 p& ?- f* ?5 I1 u: s' ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ \9 u- e* t8 W5 i2 J$ f6 [( U4 i我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 \% d$ ^/ c+ L8 U0 Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>