【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 Z* R* X- Y, D- P歌词我附在后面。
8 |" y% S# P5 x2 PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 q  ]" L: g6 c# d* b% h2 ?; PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% ]9 Z: h! V2 Z/ W6 a! f% NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 z! D9 c( A  J3 sThe sky is happy down to its soul
% S6 _& g  \: E: q4 a% z8 yWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* k* O) s3 s/ @: N$ t4 f/ MMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, o) S: m  w" T' _Every other word you utter is love
4 c  l/ ~# o: b  B+ II really want to know just how much you love me
2 |' |  u7 g3 [5 u) T+ e( bI love you I love you with all my heart
; _( M! \0 x) _" ^: ONothing can compare to my love
7 d5 }9 C4 G3 Y- h: ]1 }, D, VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 q$ \/ [1 i6 }4 `$ FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 E. C3 B; ~( i% kI’m still filled with fear
1 P) d$ [' m9 Z7 n% gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! u( x4 `$ T+ K( KI regret not dying
" C# P0 H& [$ H- U) K! W+ jI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ a( D1 \8 X5 P' rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 {6 Y* N- B$ q7 oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 ~. K  q. C! a0 N6 WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 k# c' Y% W: s% t6 }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 Y$ H9 P  |% e  a6 g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 t/ G* {4 h  n" N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* Z  c. U* [7 g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, V- o. ?+ o9 ~' @' k0 Z7 m<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 D- d1 @- b2 J* {. n! n$ v; m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 M2 K0 \; ~% O3 r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 R+ C5 Q2 F& f& G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) H3 U  l, i7 ~* {2 F8 @( O4 ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' q* z" K( u0 R" e9 r3 r/ z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 x9 I# s2 H. a' z. t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 X8 i/ R3 i# m1 a0 {) j0 l( _0 g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 i2 H7 S  \- T- E" u7 g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: [3 g: ?  s3 ~+ q( [7 C$ p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. ?5 a/ A4 H4 n! A( k# p' u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ v/ ?* X, G" g: J% M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  T! V+ u6 i8 h* o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ |2 k/ l+ b- f  H) L/ Z/ }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 s% g' L+ E5 k1 I$ q+ G$ [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ h) a( N4 S; ]) L8 S2 R<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ T+ x9 z6 J. T9 v5 p! W% |% \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! t6 i# O6 W0 |! x2 S0 v  y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 c' I- a$ R* v+ n( I# e0 `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; ?# Z/ m* W& z6 Z& H$ R8 e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; w6 p9 C$ t6 @" z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 E+ v" w6 Z$ i4 z1 o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: v$ L, f, |: I, D" E. u( U<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>