【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) f. W) y" i/ b. {1 Q/ l/ lThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 L4 `! |9 {9 w+ Z& s, SSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( P$ U2 x& C: a4 }Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 `0 U2 d) t( G; dI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 z; w# _5 c0 m: m" [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, M% V1 B: y# E$ O2 o. }- @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: Z0 c5 [  g* p; eI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 n- t7 e0 ^% ?+ q  ?  @! ?<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 J0 H# D- o$ `& N5 P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 H& W1 e+ w; j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& E4 e6 {4 K4 s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; ?4 `3 R1 P% l7 z) y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- u  X; E+ r+ E3 G1 S5 o- b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( U% ?' u, q& e! R7 i$ V* \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: a2 k! p+ s" s  d. j) ^4 n8 P" G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 n' R2 Y+ ], P; t7 ^* O<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# h. o& \5 W$ h, \# H. V3 G; R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 g. m) u' k6 s7 |# q: Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 {; H1 T- n& B3 z+ X3 k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 q# b9 l: n( O5 S" Q/ D+ G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 N7 ]9 t- b9 B( g  a! J7 k: G( x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. a: n) W4 D" X. S& v<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 x0 \/ t/ [& V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, H! i; L1 B) f7 X6 P! k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 b* A5 W, p* M% K. A+ n( n' B7 h8 B/ F<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ M& ^" }" p; z+ @  \' I+ F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ f7 ^0 d  u4 k8 p. p4 a; h<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) N, F0 O- e$ \1 k- ~9 f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: F8 _- `, f" @  M+ V: }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, F8 B8 y) T: m<P>I regret not dying</P>
! J3 u8 Y0 H0 f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 Y( g& @, K# C) U& x) b; A' p<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% ~6 A- Y) y, W3 Z' k<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* x! B" t! M" [1 t) p9 E5 S! l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  p4 O, c5 R$ s+ C9 P<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 H: ]2 ?$ {$ ?4 ^+ j7 _6 S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 B2 E; G$ M) G' J/ N* j: P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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