【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
! M5 I; ]2 R0 Q6 `The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; Y. [$ J  z# s3 H3 aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 b8 O- j4 \. P1 V5 V( E) VWith the moon kissing it every night
! A6 m! m- R3 m" K$ lSeeing the sky content with its love
8 Y0 ^* @" e% ]4 L. y, KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. }4 m% E2 N8 F' k0 VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 I/ x3 @* V- ?8 _5 C* t8 bI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! {; X( N8 W1 z& z, dI’m still filled with fear
$ X9 N: ^& B! i, W: @- R' N, fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  H) c( x* M; s8 Z( rI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% W: q; H0 V( b) k/ H- c9 B; V5 e, eWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' n+ @- h$ Q) |8 z6 bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 v  Z) y! m- E# z3 O& I  FRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  @( u5 _  L+ h* ~<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: v3 X8 \: Y/ Z" d. _: D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% ^9 @  E# R2 Y. N4 H% e0 _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" C- P5 i+ B, J% a1 @2 m, Q4 s7 z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ I+ v1 Z( C+ Y  Z) X. X9 {9 f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 ?" ^) H" w* a( c8 N# }<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 d+ @3 U. `& t  v' Z' q7 `7 m! V. s5 o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 q. S# M, X( W/ z2 d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 R+ D& |& d: v, Z7 P) j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! f" A. U& o4 j<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: o% E- ?0 S$ H( Y  ]) R) A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 B; L" H: g5 H" {1 W) p) }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 t8 w$ N, a6 A" J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( H; T. _4 }! c( E7 t0 W4 S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 }- y2 y& q& S; e* B- Q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- ?8 K/ w  ?7 [0 }6 L% m3 h. V. J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 i9 L6 R# J1 n- k/ v<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% ~: }3 V* i: Q1 T: |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. ~' y- D& O7 x/ o9 U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) f1 m9 e+ H' y9 @6 S<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% ~1 c+ c! N1 d# G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- H! ?+ J- s4 U+ Z2 R<P>I regret not dying</P>
; Z2 V  s) `3 t8 i7 s! M) g& R0 I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, D3 J1 @5 A7 d; P. V7 o0 ]<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& P; h- f7 b3 S* |; c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. e% u; d& G' o, y: h& H0 |; g' F. s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  t& ]1 `  M' p7 ^) d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  i; i" I" s# f1 X) Z4 c4 \<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 ]4 y" i  p) i7 P+ d; w% p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 z/ F& d. H; R3 m) O* I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( j+ {" N: Z* K<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! M: s) \0 V- M1 F( w1 Z9 ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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( z6 v6 D5 ?; x0 P8 x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>