【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
2 x  [  _7 m: `  e* Q9 G0 n4 A) RThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 W; ]0 T/ n: ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 L  F( d* k- |4 k7 WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 l) W  O" ]; X5 eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) v) }4 o% l$ H% fThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 }: _( K3 i) H9 o* J: ?, CIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ Q8 w; P! K" Y: Y5 V2 n2 rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: z' `7 k! I: V6 Z! i) h. ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% n1 r0 f+ U) y* ?* ~  y% i; iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 a8 F+ ]2 W7 ?1 V0 d; [8 {I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ k0 _% e, v/ S# [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 |9 P( z& i6 e  K& uI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* `0 P# s) V: w, s" J" KWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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; U* A, V6 A5 z, Q- }, S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. y( e$ D2 ^/ S' G1 Y( D<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 w7 R$ @2 N5 Z/ F2 S: h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 h4 X2 V; R) O/ J  L- D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  C3 S% q1 o2 S& g3 W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( _* D0 G0 w+ L# H  T; T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 t- c9 F. d5 G1 _" a: X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 c9 j  R+ O) T3 n) H<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ P: `0 N) ~! H2 U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ f- O5 z  I& F5 ~4 J  [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( X+ Y  j! @) X. G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 N: h; j* v8 G6 N% m  E8 B: b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ Z. M! K" @4 c- l! f0 s3 w9 U/ n1 S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 W! ]; O) g2 e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  f6 R! j/ R* B( ^, A& X9 l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 k& n; H& Y) Z: d) F2 j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 C. [- q! ?1 Z' l2 ]3 P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 U9 ^) C% [- g8 A<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- M( u2 J1 {/ ?  W: q) e<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 J# U% u& N3 i& Y% U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. V$ T+ A( D9 u! O( @. B  t0 R0 c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  `; l, B! s3 m  x. Z3 ~3 D* q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 @  |% V! k% c' C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* S% C% U- \4 q( v9 p; T; n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 \* z1 M; G# a# n5 d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* \, G3 k# ^* D5 J% q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>