【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  m' ?3 B4 M# A  a; e, H9 Z" q歌词我附在后面。
3 x% m+ N( e, W9 s4 cThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 ~8 o$ l1 }9 U1 B4 m) QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
9 E- O8 J0 P7 Z, J; }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( y- a! o( N5 U/ LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ K3 [. g( \) d" B4 a( RWith the moon kissing it every night
& v3 d! @; H0 w( qSeeing the sky content with its love
/ l' M. P; H- W6 E. F. s) R8 WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" N5 W/ d6 B3 o9 \. Z( M0 J! wI really want to know just how much you love me
$ _, Q' I- ]7 A+ S" J4 }; `I love you I love you with all my heart
" ^- @* n2 f' y" }0 _3 YNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 t* P" q2 Q2 {, VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' G; j7 I  h7 z1 D5 Z8 s$ fI want so much to see inside your heart
# D4 p$ B$ s" h9 `$ JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 r' X( W) ]5 ~( \  u# M+ J2 _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 p+ m* N1 l& J+ |% EI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" t3 ]) V" d1 @' I/ j; p+ wWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- r' D( B* [# O# F- ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  H0 M8 `' p2 G. e3 c0 u<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# c# E' [/ e% @( i% q3 j/ I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& q- j3 s/ B- J8 G( @: g# L" S, B<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, k, }" n# X' G5 K% J/ m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, z! ?- ]; P# z3 F# v+ |9 J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( ~" Q" F+ |- M! d4 ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( ?0 v% J% ]* |% n" i# @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- y: a3 J9 Z# K4 f; ~& s$ {<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 k' z; v  g6 T3 I; ]6 E0 I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 f8 O+ S2 `; F$ `3 t5 Z0 F5 c6 x! \+ S* s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( z# s  N$ E  w4 V; D9 g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 Z2 P; v* D2 g& z- g5 b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- B* O5 Q( M! |. c/ e) M& u$ |. m* A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, V3 \2 X( d( {* [% F$ u5 [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 D1 \$ ~& p- m' O! I  U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% Q; Y& S, ~8 M: V- r% o<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- d3 P; c/ k' h" L' M, _<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 r& S" F$ z3 i. S  \2 U+ ~  `8 D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' s& J; W" \  a4 |<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- F, o0 e- d% d4 n; y$ S# J<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( P2 X9 i  g+ A! i1 l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 c( e5 b8 N: M9 P<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: N  n% K6 V0 q2 Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- L, J5 P, M/ u& k3 s: q+ i  W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 `0 B( `3 F: D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

, H  w, w9 x/ G: P: u+ U( Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>